Scene Frustration +Storyboard Vent

After Grahams feedback I really don't know how I am supposed to visually communicate the character thinking, plus I am afraid of the expectations laid upon me to make the animation more illustrative. On top of that I am afraid of making changes to the storyboard, the issue being I would have to rearrange all the shots backwards or forwards and renumber them. This will take just as long a time it did to make the storyboard so I really don't know what to do. Maybe I can get some help or hints from the other students?